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An Unfolded Whisper

~ A lilac endeavor of promised importance came strolling along on a path in the sun Its fragrance unfurling this side of September when springtime was singing for winter was done With meadowlarks chatting in off color language while watching the roses now bloom by the wall She fancied a smile in lace covered cotton with hair gold and windy, the belle of the ball I stood there a’ staring, my eyes hardly leaving the shape of her world filled with raspberry dreams Along an old footpath with grass patches growing and banks touching lilies, all lining the streams My heart felt a tremor, like mountaintops falling in piles of pebbles and granite like things Her beauty a fashion, none other was wearing, a fine velvet cloth stitched in apricot strings She looks my direction with eyes colored passion and lips made of honey as sweet as the bees Now watching her fingers collecting the samples of Ginkgo leaves floating the back of the breeze She laughed in the open, a bright sun was shining midst butterflies tinting their wings greenish blue I followed her northward, my hand in my pocket, then pulled out a poem said, “This is for you” An unfolded whisper ‘tween petals of daisies now telling a story of love or of not Her glance towards the paper was finding her grinning, her painted toes tingled, her breath just forgot I melted like butter on sidewalks in August when feeling her smile pressed tightly to mine I guess in the verses with lines penned in rhythm she knew of my joy, I had told her in rhyme So now we just wander directions that beckon when autumn is sleeping and summer awakes Picking up branches, like sculpting a sunset or bridging a pasture, whatever it takes With overall blue jeans and knees wet and muddy, we tend to the gardens the earth it does claim While sharing our wine with a cat and a moon bean, enjoying each other, now who could complain

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Date: 3/4/2023 7:06:00 AM
This poem takes one on such a whimsical journey, so full of imagery. Enjoyed.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2023 9:14:00 AM
Thanks a bunch Nancy. I appreciate your kind words
Date: 3/4/2023 12:06:00 AM
WOW!!! Incredible writing. A vision, a promise, a welcome to heartbeats and moonbeams... this voice embraces the spirit with colors in lyrics. I love this so. A fave. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Chris Green
Date: 3/6/2023 9:14:00 AM
Thank you so very much Gina. I am thrilled you liked this
Date: 3/3/2023 2:11:00 PM
Epic, Chris! So well crafted... Truth be told, I rarely read a poem this long, normally skipping long sections to get the end. But not this classic. I simply hung on every word. It's going right into my faves. Thanks for posting it, and have a wonderful weekend
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Chris Green
Date: 3/3/2023 2:14:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend. I am happy you decided to stick around for a bit. If I had known, I would have prepared some coffee and cakes or something. Seriously, thank Gershon, I always appreciate your kindness.
Date: 3/3/2023 8:17:00 AM
Wow!! This is beautiful. My kind of special poem all the way around. Another Fave for me too. Thank you for sharing :)
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Chris Green
Date: 3/3/2023 9:14:00 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi. I am happy you liked this. I had a lot of fun writing it.
Date: 3/3/2023 6:25:00 AM
Chris, I probably have the shortest FAVE list on poetry soup but this gets a HUGE FAVE from me....the meter, and flow led me on a wonderful wander through this dreamy delight.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/3/2023 6:33:00 AM
Wow, thanks John. You humble me with your comment. I appreciate this and am thrilled you enjoyed this so much. Thank you so very much.
Date: 3/3/2023 5:55:00 AM
What a perfect poem to start my day. Just wonderful Chris. How lucky for you both:)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/3/2023 6:03:00 AM
Good thing for us, you did. I hope all is well with you and yours my friend. Have a great day and a large weekend.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/3/2023 6:01:00 AM
Thanks Daniel. I am glad this brought a happy start to your day. That is what I always want my poetry to do if I can. This was just a crazy idea that filled me head so I had to let it out.

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