An Unclenched Fist

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An unclenched fist and open heart The way we live our life Knowing all souls one, none apart We’re free from narrow strife Content the way things are Although we do not spar We’ve slowly come afar No to do list An unclenched fist 16-January-2022 Quietus

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Robert Lindley

Date: 1/16/2022 4:24:00 PM

If only blindness was truly defeated. If only we could such depths see. Such a wonderful new path dare take. Live, love abandon this world not feeling cheated. Greet with open hand each, instead of a closed fist. Your verses amazing and imagery presented divine my friend. A fav-- and a gem. God bless..

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/16/2022 5:50:00 PM

Thank you, Robert! On experiencing Oneness, we know that there are no ‘others’ and God’s energy is love, all else but a thought construct

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/16/2022 3:09:00 PM

Oh that we could all regard our lives in this way. It is difficult in these trying times. Blessings xxoo

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/16/2022 7:28:00 PM

Very true my friend.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/16/2022 5:48:00 PM

Recognising that we are actually a soul having human experience in organic form, life perspective shifts