Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Verse

- An Umbrella For Two -

The faces are lifted 
                 towards heaven
                 Rain falls 
                 like tears from 
                 a grieving sky 
                 The perfect moment 
                 Under an umbrella for two 
                 You will see that the sky is singing 
                 and shelves every moment on this earth 




01.04.2014
A-L Andresen :)


Contest Name Poem with a theme of "Umbrella" 
Sponsor Leonora Galinta 
Deadline 4/23/2014

(3 th in the contest)

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Jslambert Mister Roboto August 2, 2014 at 6:31 PM PART 2....I don't read and comment so ppl comment on my stuff. I Think poets could actually learn if they took the time to read the works of other writers. That's why I am here. So, thanks for sharing here under the umbrella of your words! Hopefully you don't get sick of my two cents worth on your stuff. I really am impressed and will carry on until my time runs out tonight! Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2014 at 6:25 AM - 2 - If all were quite similar to each other, it would be boring - Some write so "deep" that I do not understand what they are writing about :))) - But, as you say ... we are here to learn - I am happy that you chose my poem - Thank you, JSL !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jslambert Mister Roboto August 2, 2014 at 6:25 PM With time on my side, and bad weather in my skies this fine Saturday, something inside told me to PICK a POET and read till ya' bleed. THEN, the tough part was how to pick from all the poets. SO, I randomly clicked on one of your comments which took me to your poems, and I GOT HOOKED! I figure, you spent all the time and effort writing these, I might as well dive in and read em', What better way to get to know a poet. Besides, I don't really care that not many ppl read my stuff on here. Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2014 at 6:20 AM - I'm pleasantly surprised :))) - You've spent a lot of time on my poems - Highly appreciate your visit - I used to call my poems for "small kitchen table poems" - Writing from my heart and the things that occupy me in worldview - use simple words - I am in essence not so concerned about how others write - everyone is different -

John Beam April 11, 2014 at 4:24 PM I enjoyed reading some of your poetry, this afternoon and belated congrats on your win Anne-Lise Andresen April 12, 2014 at 3:14 AM - Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, John. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sam Toil April 10, 2014 at 6:13 AM Beautiful rendering of a tender moment. I especially like the last line and your novel use of the word "shelves". Very creative. ...Sam Anne-Lise Andresen April 10, 2014 at 6:55 AM - A little romance under one umbrella - Thanks for your visit and your comments,Sam :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ariana Petrin April 5, 2014 at 8:32 PM Thanks For Your Help...I Enjoy Your Poems It Shows Love And Enjoyment Of Being On This Earth...Ariana Anne-Lise Andresen April 6, 2014 at 6:26 AM - Thanks for your visit and your comments,Ariana :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso April 4, 2014 at 10:54 PM I loved this poem, I think I will go buy an umbrella and hope for rain! :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 5, 2014 at 6:00 AM - Buy one for me too. . . I have no umbrella :))) - A little romance under one umbrella - Thanks for your visit and your comments, Arthur :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman April 4, 2014 at 8:58 PM Anne-lise, congrats on your win with this simply sweet poem! Love, Kim Anne-Lise Andresen April 5, 2014 at 5:55 AM - Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Kim. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A April 3, 2014 at 10:25 PM ANNE, congrats on your AWESOME win. .. Luv ~SKAT~ Anne-Lise Andresen April 4, 2014 at 2:47 AM - Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Skat. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire April 3, 2014 at 2:51 PM Dear Anne-Lise, This is so beautiful. I love your description of rain as tears from the sky. Congratulations on your win! Love, carolyn Anne-Lise Andresen April 4, 2014 at 2:47 AM - Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Carolyn. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A April 3, 2014 at 12:31 PM Anne, :) Congratulations, wonderful winning Umbrella poem. Enjoyed my BFF's winning list..... luv LINDA Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2014 at 12:54 PM - Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Linda. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud April 3, 2014 at 10:26 AM this was really a champ poem, anne...congrats and huggs! Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2014 at 12:53 PM - Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak April 3, 2014 at 7:55 AM Congrats on your win. You found a beautiful moment to share in the rain. Loved it! Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2014 at 12:53 PM - Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Monterey. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chuck Melugin April 3, 2014 at 6:14 AM Dear Anne Lise Congratulations! The sky is singing! So original! Your poems always sing! Hugs from Texas, chuck Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2014 at 12:51 PM - Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Chuck. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Theresa Stephens April 3, 2014 at 5:21 AM Hi, Congrats on your win. Clever choice of words to describe a moment in the rain. Regards Theresa xx Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2014 at 12:51 PM - Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Theresa. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta April 3, 2014 at 4:57 AM My congratulations for writing this lovely poem, enjoyed it, anne Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2014 at 12:50 PM - Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Dr. Ram. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2014 at 10:52 PM I see you won!! Congratulations to you. Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2014 at 2:24 AM - Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Andrea. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler April 2, 2014 at 7:03 PM A very sweet and romantic poem. This was a lovely write, Anne Lise, and I enjoyed it very much! Congratulations on your win, as well! :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2014 at 2:23 AM - Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Kelly. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair April 2, 2014 at 6:44 PM Enjoyed reading, A-L, Congrats on the win!! Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2014 at 2:23 AM - Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Jag. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick April 2, 2014 at 2:59 PM Congrats on your winning work..I feel that it is somewhat sad..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2014 at 2:22 AM - Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Sara. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath April 2, 2014 at 1:13 PM Great love under an umbrella. Lucky they are those who enjoy such moment. Genius simply, my lovely friend. Congrats too. Loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen April 2, 2014 at 1:21 PM - Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, my good friend bl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Keith O.J. Hunt April 2, 2014 at 1:07 PM Beautiful Anne! :-) Anne-Lise Andresen April 2, 2014 at 1:20 PM - A little romance under one umbrella - Thanks for your visit and your comments, Keith :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cecilia Macfarlane April 2, 2014 at 12:52 PM A sweet write and win! Big congrats! Anne-Lise Andresen April 2, 2014 at 1:18 PM - Thanks for visiting my poem: - An Umbrella For Two - and greeting, Cecilia. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun April 2, 2014 at 10:39 AM My warm and hearty congratulations on this brilliant piece and win my very dear friend Anne Lise ! Thank u so much for your loving support. More blessings! Biggest hugs! Love lots always, Leonora Anne-Lise Andresen April 2, 2014 at 11:12 AM Thank u so much for my win, dear friend Leonora ! :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2014 at 1:35 AM very nice, Anne lise! good luck in the contest. Anne-Lise Andresen April 2, 2014 at 2:13 AM - A little romance under one umbrella - Thanks for your visit and your comments,Andrea :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey April 1, 2014 at 11:37 PM I have enjoyed this moment several times being under an umbrella for two under the rain...couple of times in the pouring rain! You have impressed me by the splendor of this incredible poem! I really enjoyed reading this lovely piece this evening! What a delightful write, Great Work!! Anne-Lise Andresen April 2, 2014 at 2:12 AM - A little romance under one umbrella - Thanks for your visit and your comments,Russell :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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