An Owl

an owl flies so low over packed winter's white snow... inattentive mouse

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 8:18:00 AM

I just love the owl Sara, nice haiku...Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2014 3:28:00 PM

oh, yes, this one is one of nature's tragedies just waiting to happen!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/3/2014 1:15:00 AM

Great imagery in this little gem Sara!

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/3/2014 12:26:00 AM

Oh my..! But then again, it may be a (white out mouse) getting about, I don't think Bubo would touch it..? Having gone vegan years ago Sara, so your mouse is safe from any members of my site..' hope that puts your mind at rest..! enjoyed the write. Take care Joe.'

Justin Bordner

Date: 6/2/2014 8:35:00 PM

Inspiring visual Sara, enriching moral, perfect art. J.A.B.

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 6/2/2014 9:42:00 AM

Oops! Bad for him :) Like it, Sara. Enjoy your day!