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an owl

an owl flies so low over packed winter's white snow... inattentive mouse

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 6/9/2014 8:18:00 AM
I just love the owl Sara, nice haiku...Linda
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Date: 6/3/2014 3:28:00 PM
oh, yes, this one is one of nature's tragedies just waiting to happen!!
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Date: 6/3/2014 1:15:00 AM
Great imagery in this little gem Sara!
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Date: 6/3/2014 12:26:00 AM
Oh my..! But then again, it may be a (white out mouse) getting about, I don't think Bubo would touch it..? Having gone vegan years ago Sara, so your mouse is safe from any members of my site..' hope that puts your mind at rest..! enjoyed the write. Take care Joe.'
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Date: 6/2/2014 8:35:00 PM
Inspiring visual Sara, enriching moral, perfect art. J.A.B.
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Date: 6/2/2014 9:42:00 AM
Oops! Bad for him :) Like it, Sara. Enjoy your day!
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