An Ounce Of Tears

"pledge is flooding my bed" that last linesss!!!! Gawshh, how melancholic and profound this is dear Len, expressing those regrets that remain unsaid and unheard, as the darkness gets soaked in the closest spaces.. very heartfelt and profound... A heart filled with tears! I can feel the ache here! Beautifully done for the contest, best of luck! Sending you soothing stars and cosmic light! ⭐⭐💫💫💎💎

Len, your fantastic poem beautifully captures the sadness and regret one might feel during difficult times. The imagery of tears flooding a bed is powerful, painting a vivid picture of emotional struggle.

I like your take on this prompt, Len. The evocative language of grief leaves its mark. ~ Regards // paul