Talia Hill Poet Kimo

An Ounce of Tears

Cup runneth over; chalice of sorrow
Drowning in each sip I take,
Fighting for one last breath.

* 'The Numbers Game' Poetry Contest
* Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud
* Submitted/Written on: 9/5/2026

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Anne-Lise Andresen September 27, 2026 at 5:09 AM - So much emotion in a cup, lovely Talia :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich September 26, 2026 at 6:57 PM Very nicely done to express grief. Congrats on the contest

Sotto Poet September 25, 2026 at 4:06 AM Congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful Kimo.