AN OUNCE OF TEARS

That last line. Wow! Congrats, Sotto

A deserved win, Sotto, congratulations.

Heartiest congratulations on your win, SP!

- A pleasure to read again, Las ... congratulations on your win in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

This is so beautifully crafted kimo my dear poet friend. A winner for me. Thanks a lot for sharing. I enjoyed a lot. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs

a brilliantly written Kimo. best wishes, sir, with this contest entry. sending you best wishes from Texas.

This is an incredible kimo, immaculate, imaginitive and insightful, Sotto. Exquisite word spectrum and lyrical narrative. Profundity allied to colour in each line. A truly marvellous in its entirety.🔥🔥🔥 Best of luck with it.

this is a breath to breathe, Sotto! fav

Great poem Sotto. Well done :)

Wonderful selection of words, dear Sotto... You have a great vocabulary and use it to create great imagery... An excellent Kimo..

I enjoyed reading. Your "AN OUNCE OF TEARS" is a wonderful write. "Good Luck" I also did "AN OUNCE OF TEARS." Have a lovely day/weekend writing away...........

- Las, this almost brought me to tears... really sensitive and beautifully written - Best wishes in the contest - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs

“ orchids fade like brief embers “ gosh and those blossoms returning as rain, sigh, he melancholia in this flows with effortlessness …and is so heartfelt! Those flickering lanterns landing on the fields of sadness.. I can absolutely picture that! Truly a brilliantly knitted kimo for the contest, very soul-touching, dear Sotto! Sending you soothing stars and moonbeams, Keep writing ~ 🌙🌙💫💫✨✨