Just That Archaic Poet Poet Rhyme

An Ounce of Pretention

A healing Heart will now depart to seek anew 
the chance of start to make it right come 
what may or might, but be well prepared if 
you are smart! For you never know what Fate 
bestows which can hit so hard with heavy 
blows, lift you up, throw you down, or bless 
you sweetly if it so chose...

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Mark Peterson November 2, 2013 at 11:31 AM It's all true and from somewhere hope keeps pushing us to try again. Unless we seek, we never find, but oh the pain. Thanks for this delightful rhyme. Mark Just That Archaic Poet November 2, 2013 at 11:34 AM Thanks for stopping by, Mark; I sincerely appreciate the feedback :)

Nudershada Cabanes November 1, 2013 at 4:34 PM Excellent piece. we never know what fate has in store for us we could only hope that fate would be kind so as not to throw us down in the journey of life. Just That Archaic Poet November 2, 2013 at 8:14 AM Very true, N. Thanks for reading and replying :)

Robin Davis October 30, 2013 at 5:26 PM My Friend this is a truthful and honest write. You never know what life will put you through or give you each day. Nice write. Thanks for the nice comment on my Love Hints poem. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea Just That Archaic Poet October 31, 2013 at 8:39 AM Thanks for the review, Sweet Pea! <3

Joseph Matose October 30, 2013 at 12:13 PM great poem. Your 'stamina' is unique. Keep it. Friend, JM Just That Archaic Poet October 31, 2013 at 8:39 AM Thanks for your review as always, JM :)

Richard Lamoureux October 30, 2013 at 8:53 AM Sounds like a roller coaster ride. Just That Archaic Poet October 30, 2013 at 9:01 AM I guess life can be akin to a roller-coaster ;)

Nette Onclaud October 29, 2013 at 12:11 PM hard-hitting write with a gentle reminder in the end,JTAP... i see hope bewtween your fine words... well done!..:) huggs Just That Archaic Poet October 29, 2013 at 12:17 PM Thanks for stopping by and for the review and kind words, Nette; I appreciate it :)