An Orchid For My Rose

Your eyes lead me to the Rose
that within your heart your soul,
yet it is the orchid chose
that leads me here, a mind stole
in dreams of the perfect goal.

Now lost am I to you Rose
a loser in mortal shame,
inept another I chose
took a chance on just a name
because life said ‘one of fame.’

Alas this lesson I learn
it’s not how one sees the frame
the truth within this I yearn,
for i am the one to blame
for dousing our true love’s flame!

© Harry J Horsman  2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Raven Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 3:41 PM
Hi Harry, congratulations on your win in the const with this wonderful piece. have a wonderful Tuesday. Your friend always....mike.
Gauthier Avatar
November 11, 2018 at 7:16 PM
Congrats on your top win, Harry.
Nicole Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 7:55 PM
A rose in bloom, will never lose its fragrance. Even though, it has been placed to the side. Sometimes, love needs a moment alone- before truly blooming into so much more. Congratulations harry, on this win. ~ Brandy
Guzzi Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 3:24 PM
Naww I don't believe you were to blame, you're a gent! Light & Love
Maverick Avatar
November 11, 2012 at 12:47 AM
A good and write here on the way things pan out sometimes Harry.. Enjoyed the read today.
Wesley Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 9:12 PM
Such a sad tale Harry, lessons to be learned that somehow are forgotten. When will we wake up? At least you can admit where the blame lies.
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 11:57 AM
Congratulations on the win in the "Romance" contest Harry. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 3:45 PM
Glad to see you came out a winner in the contest. she said in her blog that many did not follow the rules. Harry, what is going on? You said you have gotten busy? BIG congrats here.
Kendrick Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 3:22 PM
Congrats on your winning work...Sara
Johnson Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 2:14 PM
And so the fire no longer burns. Leaving an aching heart that yearns. A funeral flower for the grave. Of a love you could not save. Beautiful sentiment Harry.
Mannan Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 1:31 AM
Beautiful Write Harry. Warm congrats for the win.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 1:17 AM
Big congratulations on your win harry , new it was a stunner sweetheart xx
Roberts Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 10:23 PM
congrats on your 4th place win Harry, great job
Walter Skyy Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 10:58 AM
i really like tihs poem.and thank you for ur comment on mine. Have a good day
Sanderson Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 1:57 AM
Dazzling poetic piece of work, my dear xoxo
Chircop Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 1:25 AM
Soooooooooooo Beautifully penned Harry.Nice to read your poetry oncemore
Sweetheart Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 1:10 AM
A STUNNING MAJESTIC WRITE HARRY LUV .. SO ENSITIVE .. SO ENDEARING .. A FABULOUS TITLE ..ORCHIDS R MY FAV FLOWER OF ALL .. SO PRETTY .. WINNING WISHES LUV..
Landon-Lane Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 11:49 PM
Harry - Orchid or rose, it does not matter when your words make them equally beautiful..and I don't believe a true flame could ever burn out. We may bank he embers, but we are never lost in the quatraine! You are amazing Harry! Never stop writing, please please!! Elizabeth
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 2:57 PM
sad and romantic, Harry. How can you go wrong with one like this? I have only half an hour to play catch up here and try to reply back to nearly two days of comments to me. sorry I can't seek more of your oldies out to read. Hope you come up with some new ones. I love seeing your new posts. Luv, andrea
Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 2:31 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in Francine's contest..Enjoyed reading about your love today...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Andresen Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 10:53 AM
A truly lovely poem Harry - Luck in contest. - Have a nice new week - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 9:35 AM
The Orchid can be so alluring, we sometimes think the exotic is so appealing and that the Rose is ordinary. Our Silly silly hearts are so easily distracted. Another thought provoking poem.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 5:56 AM
soup xx
Nair Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 5:10 AM
Sure, this one was written in one of those rare moments of inspiration, such an attractive piece it is, Harry,.. thnx for your uplifting comments!! Jag
Carrillo Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 9:28 PM
Harry; This is just beautiful. It has so much feeling. You are not a loser, with this you are a winner. Good luck in the contest. Lucilla
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