Johnny H. Poet Rhyme

An Opportunity

I can see through your eyes
Into the back of your head
The words that were on your mind
Are left there for dead

I can hear a time bomb ticking 
Near our feelings, as they dance
Until their end has come
Until I lose my chance

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Chelsea ... July 21, 2009 at 9:50 PM I like this one, a lot, it feels like there's a lot of emotion here. This is a great write, good job