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An Old Photo

Your smiling photo never frowns, the twinkle in your eyes remains; I wish to step into that scene, and cure my heart of all its pains. For Bryan's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/11/2018 5:52:00 PM
this is so lovely. Best of luck in that contest. Is it for his newest one or was it in the one that just got judged?
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Date: 3/10/2018 4:53:00 PM
Oh so tender, touching and poignant Jack. Your last two lines really pulled at my heartstrings.. riveting reminiscing and excellent poetry my friend..
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Date: 3/10/2018 4:05:00 PM
Very sweet, Jack. Well done.
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Date: 3/10/2018 11:58:00 AM
aw such touching lines Jack, sometimes all we have left is those old pictures and our memories:-( hugs jan xx
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