An Old Friend Reborn

Orange sherbet-streaked heavens
   at my window this morn
herald an old friend's return
   ~ newly reborn

For while the sun 
   in the sky has been
all this while, to my 
   uninformed eye
slate-gray clouds
   made me cry...

Tears and clouds
   disperse suddenly
Now's returned
      My love 
for this sweet world
      as it turns

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Date: 2/5/2020 5:19:00 PM
When we see the sun in the morning, it truly does paint the day!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/6/2020 2:51:00 PM
The sun sets the stage, the mood, the tone... thanks, Caren! :) gw
Date: 2/4/2020 5:43:00 PM
Hello Gershon … when the weather is dreary for some time we become dreary too. I can recall a time when it hadn't rained for three months, and when it finally did, standing in it with a great sense of relief - thanks Gershon - Lindsay
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/4/2020 6:40:00 PM
Wow! I can imagine the relief after a drought for three months... ~ Gershon
Date: 2/4/2020 10:08:00 AM
A beautiful sky with its many colors. Many do not look up and miss it. What a gift it is to us. Enjoy your day........
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/4/2020 6:40:00 PM
Yes! Important to remember to look up (and around too). Thanks, Paula. :) Gershon
Date: 2/3/2020 12:42:00 PM
Seems I am not the only one who witnesses beautiful sunrises from time to time, but you express it so much more beautifully than I ever could. Loved this one my friend.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/3/2020 6:58:00 PM
What you wrote about me is precisely how I feel about you and your poems. We must be trapped in a House of Mirrors! Cheers, Chris! :) Gershon
Date: 2/3/2020 5:55:00 AM
Deliciously beautiful! I get it! Skies haven’t dawned here yet. We will see.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/3/2020 6:57:00 PM
Thanks for the nice comment on the skies, Kim. Warm, sunny wishes, Gershon
Date: 2/2/2020 6:15:00 PM
This is a lovely writer Gershon. Hopefully that friend sticks around awhile :) hugs
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/2/2020 6:59:00 PM
sun tomorrow, then the next 7 days are rain, ice, rain, clouds, snow, clouds, rain...i will enjoy whatever trails of it i get to see and feel....
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/2/2020 6:52:00 PM
Chicago gets to see our old friend tomorrow morning and then it's back to cloud cover, I'm told. Here's to better luck for PA. Cheers, Gershon
Date: 2/2/2020 4:41:00 PM
This is so nice Gershon! Well done :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/2/2020 6:47:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Heidi. est always, Gershoni
Date: 2/2/2020 3:05:00 PM
My love for our country's beauty made me say, "Yes! Yes!" while reading your poem. Beautiful, Gershon! Love the ending.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/2/2020 6:37:00 PM
Thank you so much for such a lovely, spirited comment, Carolyn! Warmest wishes, Gershon
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