An Ode To Avocados

I sampled my first one in Israel
And instantly fell for the taste,
Devouring one then another,
While adding some heft to my waist.

That happened way back in my 20’s,
When quite a bit more did I weigh,
So though I’m not quite as indulgent,
I still love to eat them today.

Sliced up and tossed into a salad
Or mashed up for dipping some chips,
They’re healthy and filling and yummy;
Just one won’t add much to your hips.

But eaten with some moderation,
They’ll add to a meal some pizzazz.
Your taste buds will groove with sensation,
Each bite smooth and silky like jazz.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 4:05 PM
I like them too, but when they are seasoned like for guacamole. Blood type diet says not good for O's but a few times a year can't hurt me!! NIcely done.
Allison Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 5:35 PM
I love avocado with marie rose sauce and prawns and salad mmmmm i feel hungry now - thanks Ilene! hugs jan xx
Rigoler Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 4:53 PM
I love avocadoes, though it my maturity to finally try one. Now I'm hooked. I like them sliced and sprinkled with fresh lemon or soaked briefly in good olive oil, lemon, and garlic. A suggestioh: I'd put "jazz" where you have "pizzazz", and change "jazz" to " pizzazz." Your choice, of course. Thanks for the stop to read me. Best to you always. /
Adams Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 3:57 PM
Oh, Jan, you awakened my taste buds with this. I always enjoy your expertise with rhyme. Great imagery. I think I'll go out an buy some Avocados.
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