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An Ocean-Ku For Heather

broad blue horizons - 
wet toes curl in soft sand dunes
soaking in sunshine






*Changed 'fat' for 'broad' on 17/04/2013.

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Andrea Dietrich

May 13, 2013 at 7:00 AM

this is really nice. And that was a wise decision to change that word to "broad"!

Kash Poet

April 25, 2013 at 8:33 PM

A great haiku here Michael.Enjoyed.

Poet Destroyer A

April 24, 2013 at 8:04 PM

Michael, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda

Donna Jones

April 23, 2013 at 1:31 PM

Congratulations Michael ..awesome

Sara Kendrick

April 16, 2013 at 2:13 PM

Very expressive and descriptive work..A great idea you have created with a few words..I can just see the scene..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

Michael Dom

April 18, 2013 at 12:42 AM

i love being near the ocean too, so this haiku Heather's oceanku is a chance to celebrate. thanks for your visit sara.