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An Ocean of Colors

A wave of colors
                pour over the quiet skyline
                                                as leaves crash on down.

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Poet Destroyer A

December 10, 2012 at 9:52 PM

you are brilliant,, pd

Debbie Guzzi

October 10, 2010 at 2:08 PM

Hi Mike the dots indicate the cut? is it ok to have it in the third line? Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

September 28, 2010 at 11:18 AM

Brilliant Michael, 2 images very vividly. The change of time, and the entry of true beauty. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

September 26, 2010 at 4:50 PM

Very colorful picture!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 25, 2010 at 6:56 PM

Bye to ocean for this season..it saddens me to say bye to Summer being a beach baby and all ... lovely picturesque vision of the wave and leaves Michael... enjoyed my W.K. J.G. always..