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An Ocean of Colors

A wave of colors pour over the quiet skyline as leaves crash on down.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2012 9:52:00 PM

you are brilliant,, pd

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/10/2010 2:08:00 PM

Hi Mike the dots indicate the cut? is it ok to have it in the third line? Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/28/2010 11:18:00 AM

Brilliant Michael, 2 images very vividly. The change of time, and the entry of true beauty. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/26/2010 4:50:00 PM

Very colorful picture!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/25/2010 6:56:00 PM

Bye to ocean for this season..it saddens me to say bye to Summer being a beach baby and all ... lovely picturesque vision of the wave and leaves Michael... enjoyed my W.K. J.G. always..

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/25/2010 2:44:00 PM

Beautiful write on autumn, "a wave of colors", great line Michael. Love the images and your poetry (",) love W

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/25/2010 5:12:00 AM

Not only the leaves but the skyline itself seems particularly colorful this time of year, Michael. Enjoyed your haiku. Love, Carolyn