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An Inward View

I much prefer to be a blur 
upon a pristine plain askew
a softer resolution stirred
on still cool lake with mountain view
For I am fraught will reflection
trembling often in introspection.

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Bl Devnath

December 16, 2011 at 9:23 AM

Congratulation my friend on your win and wish you and all yours 'Happy Christmas Day and Happy New Year'.bl

Jon Arno

December 15, 2011 at 3:59 PM

Congratulations on your winning entry Jon

Nette Onclaud

December 15, 2011 at 10:18 AM

great piece on self-observation... big cheers to you for the win.. :) nette

Fabiyas M V

December 15, 2011 at 10:06 AM

Well done,Debbie.I liked the cute words words employed in the verse.Congratulations on your great win!

Bob Quigley

December 15, 2011 at 8:46 AM

I too spend a lot of time on introspection. Maybe that is why I like this so much. Congratulations Debbie

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 15, 2011 at 5:27 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Two To Twelve" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

December 15, 2011 at 3:58 AM

Congratulations Debbie and happy forthcoming holidays x

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 21, 2011 at 2:19 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest of Moses "A Nature Verse" Debbie. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 19, 2011 at 12:26 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Debbie

Ralph Taylor

September 18, 2011 at 10:51 PM

Congrats on your win, Deb. Nice going. xxxRalph

Audrey Haick

September 18, 2011 at 7:09 PM

Congratulations on a fine win in the contest, Deb! Love, Annalise

John Freeman

September 18, 2011 at 4:28 PM

Debbie, thanks for taking the time to offer your memorable verse, the honor was mine in reading this worthy Verse entry. Agape, Moses.

Bob Quigley

September 18, 2011 at 2:57 PM

Nicely worded Debbie. Congratulations on your win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 18, 2011 at 2:02 PM

CONGRATS DEBBIE ON ANOTHER FANTASTIC WIN WITH LOVELY LINES OF POETRY LUV..

Don Johnson

September 17, 2011 at 10:17 PM

love the verse it works for me, flow n rhyme for posterity, looking 4 me lost chastity, amongst the morning dew, boo hoo...

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 14, 2011 at 8:15 AM

You always impress me with your poetry Debbie. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

September 13, 2011 at 8:38 PM

Ahhh....it is me who must reflect on your amazing introspection....never do I read a poem of yours just once....without a need to reflect. (love the comments below mine! ).... ps...soup mail coming....

Jeffry Cohan

September 13, 2011 at 2:50 PM

TO A MASTER POET...ooops....did you mean "i am fraught WITH a reflection "and i see my reflection in a snow covered hill, will a landslide bring it down, will a landslide bring it down?" and i don't want you to be a blur...i want you crystal clear as you are....your poetry makes me think, and sometimes in my mental state that ain't such a great thing, but you and your poems ARE! u know whati think of both! witout you this site wouldn't be complete and so i shall not compete! your ever luvin phriend, phan and phiend...~free cee!~ just stupendously spell binding in a few brief words, how do you and a few other people do that? i am so verbose it's akin to verbal vomit!