An Innocent Childhood Memory 2
I learnt to swim at ten
But was afraid of attempting a dive from height
Stayed in den!
I must be bold
I vowed to dive no matter plight
Why hold?
One day then
Took the three metre flight
Yen!
I learnt to swim at ten
I vowed to dive no matter plight
Yen!
Another example of MINICHU form
to encourage Soupers to attempt and participate in the contest as it is not that difficult.
2.8.2020
Note:
1. This is a New form of Rhyme named MlNICHU (proposed by me)
2. Total12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each)
3. Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD.
4. 4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of stanza1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3.
Poem should stick to a chosen theme through all stanzas. A twist can be introduced in third stanza, if required by the theme, to make it more interesting.
5. Syllable count :
Stanza 1: 6,12,3 (3 times 2,4,1)
Stanza 2: 4,8,2 ( 2 times 2,4,1)
Stanza 3: 2,4,1
Stanza 4: 6,8,1.
Copyright © Mohan Chutani | Year Posted 2020
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