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An Innocent Childhood Memory

Children enchant the beat after knocking on doors, looking for handouts, score trick or treat. October chill. Warm village firehouse parade pours out thrills — a fright of ghosts; abhors light. Children enchant the beat. Warm village firehouse parade pours light. 8/25/2020 Mohan Chutani’s Let's Minichu on an innocent childhood memory (Minichu Form)

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/2/2020 9:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I love the fall and can't wait for it to get here. Come on cooler winter. A wonderful memory. Enjoy your win and day.................

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/2/2020 8:19:00 PM

I got to enjoy in Minnesota the beginnings of cooler weather now I’m back in Hotlanta!

Mohan Chutani

Date: 8/31/2020 9:03:00 AM

Kim, Lovely village festival memories at Halloween time. Congrats for top win. Mohan

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2020 9:35:00 AM

Thank you so much, Mohan! I enjoyed the form. Blessings.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/28/2020 11:58:00 PM

I am saying to myself now, "I am so glad I did not go with a Halloween theme for this contest" because you nailed it.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2020 10:09:00 AM

Thank you, my friend!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/27/2020 7:04:00 PM

This one really works for me. Love your stylistic devices and this one moves. Whoosh, and it'll be Halloween again. ~ Pumpkins and Poesy, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2020 7:57:00 AM

Thank you! Short verses are fun to figure out. Blessings! Hope all is well with you.

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 8/27/2020 5:19:00 AM

'Children enchant the beat' - has a pulse in it.! I can see the sheet strewn, paint faced hopefuls and feel the vibe of cooling evenings. A hard form to depict a scene in. I applaud you for it.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2020 6:01:00 AM

Thank you, Sigrid!

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 8/26/2020 4:22:00 PM

Wonderful childhood memories, Kim, and for sure a top winner in the contest. Many thanks for taking time to comment on the Cuckoo Clock write. Best to you - Bob

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2020 6:22:00 PM

Thank you, Robert!

Eric Ashford

Date: 8/26/2020 9:16:00 AM

Great evocative images in this fine muse Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2020 12:42:00 PM

Thank you, Eric.

Silent One

Date: 8/26/2020 8:59:00 AM

I see Halloween is a memorable time of the year for you, full of memories, nice choice for the contest..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/26/2020 12:42:00 PM

Thank you, Silent.