An Incomplete Love Story

He’d loved her deeply in his prime
And she’d had only eyes for him,
But life’s demands need little time
To turn those bright hopes strangely dim.

For she, the eldest of the fold
Had obligations to fulfil;
Her Mother, wheelchair-bound and old
Demanded daily her good will.

The months went by and both agreed
That though their feelings were the same.
The marriage vows could not proceed
Whilst duty’s heartstrings made their claim.

And so the passing years rolled by
He’d wed, had children, so it seemed
And she, alone, would often sigh
And  mourn the life of which she’d dreamed.

An unfinished love story contest

23/07/18

Your Choice(12) Love Verse,Any Form Or Theme Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian strand
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Gondolf Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 10:54 AM
I enjoyed reading this sad love poem, Wendy, I'm glad to see in the comments that it actually had a happy ending. Congrats on your win. John
Carber Avatar
June 22, 2019 at 9:35 AM
Love poems are as often as not quite sad--and this one is a heartbreaker! Congrats on yr 1st place, Wendy
Kendrick Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 3:07 PM
Creative and expressive work. Congrats on your winner. Sara
Roper Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 8:06 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this well written poem. Hugs Eve
Watson Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 9:49 AM
That's so kind of you, Eve. Rather boring in comparison to some I've read, content wise but I'm glad that it was well received!
Gentry Avatar
July 27, 2018 at 4:56 PM
Congratulations on your win. This is a well-written perfect poem fir this contest. Rhyme and rhythm make the flow a compelling read. Well done!
Watson Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 9:50 AM
How kind of you to take time to comment, Susan. Very encouraging words. Thank you!
Haight Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 7:29 PM
Very beautifully written, Wendy. I believe many have to make these decisions, unfortunately. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Sandra
Watson Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 9:53 AM
This was based on the life of my neighbour who told us the story in her 80s. The good news was that this same love married but after his wife died he sought out Betty and they had a wonderful friendship in the closing years of life! The poem challenge didn't allow for this happy ending though!
Ajmal Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 1:27 PM
Duties come in between the love and unfortunately this love story has to end incomplete, I really enjoyed reading this wonderful poem of yours, many congratulations on your win in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
Watson Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 9:54 AM
That's really kind of you, Faraz. There was thankfully a real life 'happy ending' to their story.
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