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An Incomplete Love Story

Sometimes my sweetie sings to me. He’s loud and often gets off key and out of tune, but I don’t care. We’re always such a happy pair. I think he’s charming as can be. He hangs out with a rowdy crowd. They horse around and get so loud. They get all muddy when they play their childish games, but that’s okay. To be his girlfriend makes me proud. We pass love notes each day at school. When others see, they think we’re cool. At fourteen, we can't marry yet. I’m lucky as a girl can get 'cause even at this age, WE RULE! “It’s ‘puppy love’!” my parents say. "Now COOL IT! Let it fade away.” Could they be right? Someday we’ll see. I think ten years from now I’ll be preparing for my wedding day! July 16, 2018, written for An Incomplete Love Story Contest December 15, 2022 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 23 Poetry Contest Received NA

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Date: 1/18/2023 8:39:00 AM
Congratulation on your win. A fun write. I enjoyed this one as you put a smile on my face. Have a blessed day.................
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Date: 7/17/2018 10:19:00 AM
Takes me back a bit, well done Janice, good luck in the contest...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/17/2018 2:51:00 PM
Thanks so much, Charlie! Janice
Date: 7/17/2018 5:01:00 AM
A precious story that was pure delight to read this morning!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/17/2018 9:05:00 AM
Thanks so much, Lyric Man! Janice
Date: 7/16/2018 5:45:00 PM
ahhh, you did a very different take and it's adorable, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/16/2018 6:35:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! Janice
Date: 7/16/2018 3:35:00 PM
Nicely written, Janice, the love between teenagers is just as real as between 25 year olds or 45 or 65, the feelings are still the same. Best of luck. John
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/16/2018 3:44:00 PM
Thanks so much, John! Janice
Date: 7/16/2018 1:46:00 PM
A sweet story you wrote Janice..though incomplete, this love has lot of company ..most can relate to the love you depict..well written, as always.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/16/2018 2:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay! Janice

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