An Illusion

I saw yonder 
this brazen sky 
leaning over
to kiss the demure earth.

I ran
toward that conjunction
to join this blissful union 
and be in perfect accord with Nature:
      To bloom like a flower
      Or twinkle like a star!

I ran 
ran in sheer madness
ran in sheer delight,
A strange sensation
spreading over me,
Lifting me high
high in the sky.

Tears of joy
welled up in my tired eyes
and I saw this dull world
in a celestial perspective.

But I went on and on…
Now distressed and spent,
A step further, I collapsed –
         Lost and defeated.



~"Sky" contest by Anthony Slausen

"Simply Beautiful" contest by Kelly Deschler
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Carber Avatar
April 20, 2015 at 12:10 PM
Great opening stanza! I like your stuff, man--you got soul! len carber
Mandani Avatar
April 23, 2015 at 5:27 PM
Thanks, man--you got heart! Appreciate your comments.
A   Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 3:10 AM
Abdul, congratulations on your beautiful win... HUGS ~LINDA~
Haight Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 10:54 AM
Amazing, Abdul...much to think about in your words. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
Mandani Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 11:06 AM
Thanks Sandra.
Yvonne Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 9:45 AM
Wow!!!! You leave me speechless! Congratulations on your win! A Fav!
Mandani Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 10:37 AM
Thanks Maurice. Appreciate much.
Deschler Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 7:44 PM
An enchanting poem filled with wonderful imagery, though those last few lines were just heartbreaking... Congrats on your win, Abdul!
Mandani Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 10:36 AM
Thanks Kelly. Glad you liked it.
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