Get Your Premium Membership

An ideal poem

a good central theme in feet iambic metre rhymes at feet ends

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/25/2015 2:47:00 AM
Very nice pen! Haiku just flows, well composed, dear friend. Enjoyed it.A 7 from me! Thanks for sharing it. Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :-) D.
Login to Reply
Desikachari Avatar
Vasudevan Desikachari
Date: 3/25/2015 3:03:00 AM
Thank you Dorian for the nice words.Wishing you a great poetic day ahead.