An Historic Event

How is the valiant fallen
on the mountain?
Swifter than eagles 
stronger than lions
the arm of Rome fallen 
to cunning.
Give me back my legions 
Quinctilius Varus!
Had you been diligent,
as you are with denarius,
strategically planning 
the battle
you might have uncovered
the heart of the barbarian
and Rome would not have fallen 
to Germania.
Tell it not at the gathering 
Senatus
weep not at the forum 
via Appia
lest the enemy glut!

First Place Winner: William Kekaula-A Historic Event- 9/24/20

9AD battle of Teutoburg. Ambushed by the Germans Varus lost three Roman Legions.
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Mitra Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 9:43 PM
An excellent write...Congrats on your win.
Kauffman Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 8:19 PM
Powerful history in story poetry, Francis. I especially love your last five lines. Congratulations on your first place win. I enjoyed this poem. You told the story masterfulyy!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 6:39 PM
An extraordinary entrance perfects its execution thoroughly, Frances, well done, blessings my friend on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
White Avatar
May 29, 2017 at 2:27 AM
wow, do I love that. Yes, thank you I do, I love this little history lesson in so few lines!
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