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Off his leash, he escapes, diving under a chair. Through each room of our house, he darts here; he darts there. Little scamp can’t be caught. He careens crazily. For his collar I reach, but he dashes from me. To his food dish he goes, Ah! My time has now come. He is back on the leash and unable to run. I know our puppy will calm down in time. We find his toys and bones he likes to bite. We gently rub his tummy as he lies beside us with the coming of the night. Lullaby, Doggie. Lay down your head. Sweet dreams for our Snickers asleep on our bed. for the Contest: Rock Me Around the Clock or Rock Me to Sleep-- Rhythm Poems

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/25/2015 4:24:00 PM
Lovely to read this again an see the cute pup:-) congrats :-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/22/2015 10:13:00 AM
Back with deserved congratulations, Andrea! Snickers is a winner too! // paul
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Date: 3/22/2015 10:03:00 AM
What a cutey! Congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 3/22/2015 9:20:00 AM
Awwww, I love these moments with Snickers that you shared with us! Reminds me of when my beloved Chanel was a 'baby'. Congrats on your fine win! Hugs for you and Snickers. Kimberly xx
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Date: 3/22/2015 8:49:00 AM
Cute. I can see a playful and nurturing you, Andrea. Congratulations on your win! Kim :)
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Date: 3/21/2015 7:20:00 PM
ANDREA, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting one of my contest. Stop by my latest blog "Old Men In Blue Jeans" if you'd like. Enjoy your win, LOVE LINDA
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Date: 3/20/2015 4:33:00 PM
Nothing better than having a pet to play with. Nice write. love phyl
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Date: 3/20/2015 9:50:00 AM
Your poem describes what I can guess from Snicker's photo. A sweet write! Julia, xx
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Date: 2/16/2015 12:08:00 AM
Andrea, Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~
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Date: 2/14/2015 9:19:00 AM
Back again to congratulate you on your win. Blessings and Happy Valentine’s Day Eve
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Date: 2/13/2015 7:56:00 PM
Congrad's on Your Win Light & Love
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Date: 2/13/2015 2:26:00 PM
I adore the poem and pic - many congrats Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/30/2015 3:37:00 PM
Puppies are so cool.
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Date: 1/7/2015 11:01:00 AM
yes this rocks Andrea, love the theme, and the rhythm...
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Date: 1/6/2015 8:48:00 AM
Hi Andrea, hope you are having a wonderful start to the new year. I see I have some catching up to do. Had all the grandkids for the holidays and was more interested in playing than reading! But they've gone home now...Big Sigh.
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Date: 1/4/2015 9:57:00 PM
So cute, Andre! And here I was thinking I was going to read a poem about an over indulgent evening with candy bars... lol! I only wish they'd stay that small... *sigh* Good poem!
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Date: 1/4/2015 1:36:00 PM
Ahhh..adorable.and puppies will rock you around and around the clock until you drop...and worth it!!
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Date: 1/4/2015 10:35:00 AM
Lovely friends lovely puppy. It's beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,bl
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Date: 1/4/2015 8:33:00 AM
This is so sweet and your puppy is adorable!
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Date: 1/3/2015 11:09:00 PM
You have a beautiful treasure and your write about that treasure is fantastic. Lovely message with excellent writing my friend. A7 and easily a ten in my personal book..
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Date: 1/3/2015 4:41:00 PM
Awe !! So cute and love the puppy name !!
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Date: 1/3/2015 4:00:00 PM
What an adorable pup! That is indeed, a beautiful tribute to him...I know he'll be very happy with you.
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Date: 1/3/2015 3:35:00 PM
sweet...cute...pet and poem. the picture is great...those eyes sure know how to touch anybody's heart! #7 // paul
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Date: 1/3/2015 10:52:00 AM
Awe!! :) I sure know that feeling, I have had my Yorkie since he was 6 weeks old, now he is 4 and I am still chasing him around to place his collar on, or he'll bring his dish to me to let me know he wants fed. 7 +++
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Date: 1/3/2015 9:53:00 AM
A really cute doggie - name too. Love, daver
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