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An Evening With Snickers

Off his leash, he escapes, diving under a chair. Through each room of our house, he darts here; he darts there. Little scamp can’t be caught. He careens crazily. For his collar I reach, but he dashes from me. To his food dish he goes, Ah! My time has now come. He is back on the leash and unable to run. I know our puppy will calm down in time. We find his toys and bones he likes to bite. We gently rub his tummy as he lies beside us with the coming of the night. Lullaby, Doggie. Lay down your head. Sweet dreams for our Snickers asleep on our bed. for the Contest: Rock Me Around the Clock or Rock Me to Sleep-- Rhythm Poems
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Allison Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 4:24 PM
Lovely to read this again an see the cute pup:-) congrats :-) Hugs jan xx
Callus Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 10:13 AM
Back with deserved congratulations, Andrea! Snickers is a winner too! // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 10:03 AM
What a cutey! Congratulations Andrea.
Shaw Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 9:20 AM
Awwww, I love these moments with Snickers that you shared with us! Reminds me of when my beloved Chanel was a 'baby'. Congrats on your fine win! Hugs for you and Snickers. Kimberly xx
Nunez Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 8:49 AM
Cute. I can see a playful and nurturing you, Andrea. Congratulations on your win! Kim :)
A   Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 7:20 PM
ANDREA, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting one of my contest. Stop by my latest blog "Old Men In Blue Jeans" if you'd like. Enjoy your win, LOVE LINDA
Babcock Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 4:33 PM
Nothing better than having a pet to play with. Nice write. love phyl
Ward Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 9:50 AM
Your poem describes what I can guess from Snicker's photo. A sweet write! Julia, xx
A  Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 12:08 AM
Andrea, Nice Rock me around the clock win. ~Skat~
Roper Avatar
February 14, 2015 at 9:19 AM
Back again to congratulate you on your win. Blessings and Happy Valentine’s Day Eve
Guzzi Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 7:56 PM
Congrad's on Your Win Light & Love
Allison Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 2:26 PM
I adore the poem and pic - many congrats Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xxx
D. Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 3:37 PM
Puppies are so cool.
Horsman Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 11:01 AM
yes this rocks Andrea, love the theme, and the rhythm...
Sirak Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 8:48 AM
Hi Andrea, hope you are having a wonderful start to the new year. I see I have some catching up to do. Had all the grandkids for the holidays and was more interested in playing than reading! But they've gone home now...Big Sigh.
Hicks Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 9:57 PM
So cute, Andre! And here I was thinking I was going to read a poem about an over indulgent evening with candy bars... lol! I only wish they'd stay that small... *sigh* Good poem!
Jones Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 1:36 PM
Ahhh..adorable.and puppies will rock you around and around the clock until you drop...and worth it!!
Devnath  Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 10:35 AM
Lovely friends lovely puppy. It's beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,bl
Lamoureux Avatar
January 4, 2015 at 8:33 AM
This is so sweet and your puppy is adorable!
Lindley Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 11:09 PM
You have a beautiful treasure and your write about that treasure is fantastic. Lovely message with excellent writing my friend. A7 and easily a ten in my personal book..
Squyres Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 4:41 PM
Awe !! So cute and love the puppy name !!
Kiser Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 4:00 PM
What an adorable pup! That is indeed, a beautiful tribute to him...I know he'll be very happy with you.
Callus Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 3:35 PM
sweet...cute...pet and poem. the picture is great...those eyes sure know how to touch anybody's heart! #7 // paul
Roper Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 10:52 AM
Awe!! :) I sure know that feeling, I have had my Yorkie since he was 6 weeks old, now he is 4 and I am still chasing him around to place his collar on, or he'll bring his dish to me to let me know he wants fed. 7 +++
Austin Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 9:53 AM
A really cute doggie - name too. Love, daver
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