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Ammended today by adding
Does silence hear its fall.?
Inscribe you silvered crescent moon,your downward flowing pall On village, parkland, swamp or cove, does silence hear its fall.? Across the bluff's in muted form, that undulate like frozen sea Where whispering waves of sound; make play this night, Before daylight; will by his presence drown.." © joe maverick 2010

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Date: 12/19/2012 3:12:00 PM
Had to look up bling, Joe. At first I thought it might be badda boom, badda bling. Seriously this is a very sensitive piece of work. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 12/13/2012 10:40:00 PM
hey, I found one way back here that I had not read. amazing!!! I really like how you entitled this one, evening of bling. Great imagination!
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Date: 5/13/2012 7:41:00 PM
Oh, "before daylight, will by his presence drown", there will certainly be the "pall" of "whispering waves"! This can be seen from different viewpoints, Joe? Or, is it the silence that heralds the break of day? Allbeit, this won't last long and his drowning pall will take on louder, and wakeful sounds.:) Lots to think about here, Joe!! Might be feeling the moon's pall, I see no moon tonight! Best wishes, Love, Mikki
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Date: 10/11/2010 2:28:00 PM
beautiful. love it
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Date: 10/5/2010 2:51:00 PM
i finished the piney woods... see if you like it
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Date: 10/4/2010 5:19:00 AM
I have thoroughly enjoyed reading your moon bling poem... you have great description and could this be a free verse or prose poetry? I think so I am not an expert.
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Date: 10/4/2010 5:15:00 AM
You have used very fine images with semi alliteration, Joe
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Date: 10/4/2010 3:20:00 AM
Such expressive and descriptive write about the moon ...I enjoyed reading your work..Sara
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