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View has cast a smile---pleasant, Those eyes must be, heaven-sent, Soothing sense sweet eyes---imparts, Silent glance, oaths fall from-hearts. Date: 08/30/2019 howmanysyllables 43434343---7777

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Date: 8/30/2019 10:01:00 AM
sometimes one can feel or see much through one's eyes.... great penning my friend...love this one :) hugs
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Date: 8/30/2019 11:13:00 AM
A first in this style where the challenge came during breaks and rhyming scheme--with my gratitude ~ Aloha William

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