William Kelii Kekaula Poet Rhyme

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An Even Exchange

View has cast a
smile---pleasant, 
Those eyes must be,
heaven-sent,

Soothing sense sweet
eyes---imparts,
Silent glance, oaths
fall from-hearts.

Date: 08/30/2019
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Sandra Adams August 30, 2019 at 10:01 AM sometimes one can feel or see much through one's eyes.... great penning my friend...love this one :) hugs William Kelii Kekaula August 30, 2019 at 11:13 AM A first in this style where the challenge came during breaks and rhyming scheme--with my gratitude ~ Aloha William