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Posted February 3rd 2025. For Brians contest
An Errant Balloon I saw a balloon yesterday. Then I saw another again today. Floating along on a sunshine ray wending on its way. Where did it come from? No one knows where will it go? where the wind blows. Did it escape from a small child’s hand? or is it a memory of something grand? A Wedding perhaps? Or a departed good friend who will meet up again round some far away bend what is it’s story? I wonder aloud As it floats along in the lee of a cloud Perhaps I could guess, but I won’t even try. Just lift my hat and wave goodbye

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Date: 2/4/2025 3:48:00 PM
Margaret, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this descriptive, delightful poem. Janice
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Margaret Foster
Date: 2/4/2025 6:08:00 PM
Thank you, Janice. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/3/2025 3:57:00 PM
Nice poem. Goes well with the picture. It isnt one of those Chinese balloons is it?:)
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Margaret Foster
Date: 2/4/2025 6:13:00 PM
Nope , just a picture from canva. Lol. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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