Daniel Corcoran Poet Rhyme

An End To Poetry

this is this is this my last poem on this site
i realise i'm not exactly brilliant but why should i fight
if i can't fully express myself theres no point at all
i guess freedom of speech on this site doesnt play ball
after the contest i'll be ending this page
maybe i'll find a site that lets me express my rage.

*thankyou to everyone who has viewed and commented on my poetry and to anyone that has
placed me in contests*

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James Marshall Goff June 20, 2010 at 9:00 AM Hi Daniel, sounds like you have noy been able to express yourself on this site......I understand, Bukowski wouldn't have been happy either! poets peace be at your side...jimbo

Amy Green June 18, 2010 at 3:18 PM Bye

Sharon Tideswell June 18, 2010 at 5:08 AM Hi Daniel, it's sad that you feel you have to leave the site. I sense there's alot of stuff going on that I'm not really aware of. Me personally, I love this site, sure I don't get as many comments as some do, but then I can't put in as much time as I'd like too. Write for yourself and enjoy writing, if others like it too then great, that's a bonus. Whatever you decide, best wishes in your writing and life ~ Sharon :)

Carolyn Devonshire June 17, 2010 at 7:26 PM Sorry to hear you're leaving, Daniel. Best wishes to you in the future. Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 17, 2010 at 6:52 PM Its for competition only Daniel.. Wicca is not something I personally believe in 100 per cent but for competition I will write on anything I see may have winning potential...appreciate your comments and your openness too.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" ... byt great rhyme in your poem .. enjoyed..

Poet Destroyer A June 17, 2010 at 6:48 PM Wow, that's good rhyming but why the leave??, You shouldn't let people get in your way, you should just stick it to them and continue your writing letting them know they can't bring you down...P.D.