An Empty Throne - Part 5 of 9

An Empty Circle – Part 5
 
A clearing they did enter slow,
though haste was of the days found deed
Beyond the waters chanting flow
of driftwood doors and ancient weed

There stood a man in beard of white,
not startled as they entered sure
His staff possessed a jeweled light,
a robe of crimson fabric bore

Through misted haze of chanted sway
they spoke for it was their command
He turned to stare with eyes of gray
and silence them with lifted hand

“You words are known before you speak
of beauty taken to the gate
A potion, magic, which you seek
to wish on hope and not too late”

Upon the floor a contoured ring
in seashell essence powered stain
A cauldron empty smokeless sting
it burned their eyes, their skin the same

“Fear not for this shall be the path,
Now step within this circled mark”
As they obeyed, with wave of staff
and suddenly their world was dark

With woven lines of vibrant glare,
a feeling ‘pon their chests fell tight
Now breathless as their thoughts did share
when sure of foot they stood in light

As focus came their worried eyes,
their castle stood as if a dream
The shaman spoke, past sorrowed cries
“Now take me promptly to your queen”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Chiri Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 8:53 PM
:)
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December 19, 2016 at 2:23 PM
Pass the popcorn, bub. Great magical ride you're taking us all on, Chris. This is beautiful, enchanting poetry. You do our profession an honor w/your gifted pen. Love and joy to you, my poetic friend.
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December 19, 2016 at 2:50 PM
Thanks so much Freddie. I am happy you are enjoying this piece. I appreciate your kindness always my friend.
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December 14, 2016 at 11:10 PM
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Polydoro Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 6:37 PM
I'm sooo agreeing with Darren!!! I can totally see the story rolling in front of me! (I'm in love by this story)
Onclaud Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 3:19 PM
ohh, a seer thickens the plot...grreat chaprt, chris,,huggs
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December 13, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Thanks so very much Nette. I am happy you are enjoying this
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December 13, 2016 at 2:31 PM
I am not even reading words anymore Chris, I am in a film, and I can see the scenery and the people, everything. I know it's a poem, and it reads fluently, and the meter, cadence, everything is as it should, but I AM in a film and it's wonderful :D
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December 13, 2016 at 4:26 PM
Can I have some of your popcorn Darren? :) Just kidding, thank so very much for this wonderful comment
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December 13, 2016 at 1:50 PM
WoW! This is good. You have a good imagination and it sored in this write. It's so good it's like I'm watching a movie. Great description of the shaman. I'm with Heidi, I'm waiting on the Queen too. A without a seven: -) Alexis
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December 13, 2016 at 4:25 PM
Thanks so very much my sweet friend for sticking with me on this.
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December 13, 2016 at 1:25 PM
Oh my Chris. I am still waiting for the Queen!
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December 13, 2016 at 4:25 PM
Thank you so much Heidi. I am so pleased you are following me on this.
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