An Empty Search

As I lay on mound of grassland,
weightless in eyes’ astounded spirit
blending with angels, dirt, and
crosses; and to bear this emptiness
in  writhing streams omnipresent
for day and twilight’s heavy
float--- my soul changes beyond
primitive instincts---a landscape
of bittersweet cycles appear,
and below it, the fluidity
from incandescent waters lap on
mouths of stars requesting patience.

Here am i sprouting below, above
and under their flesh; fulfilling
my need for deliverance out of some
needled pinch, awash by gush of rain
seeking a depth of quiet within myself,
and nothing came except a leaf falling.



Dark Contest for Charlotte Puddifoot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ayala Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 12:58 AM
Beautiful write! Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Regards, Kika
K. Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 11:07 AM
This had such a haunting feel for me, where you paint the words with imagery. I found this to be both beautiful and melancholic, with a last line that just stayed with me. I am one who is so fascinated with falling leaves. I literally stop sometimes, as they fall, just watching them. Congrats on your win!
A. Sharma Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 1:31 AM
Congrats on ur winning lovely lyric Daniel!
A   Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 8:49 PM
Hi Daniel, congrats on the win...Linda
Gibson Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 1:42 PM
Congratulations, Daniel, on a beautifully written winning poem.
Puddifoot Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 6:05 AM
this is a very well written piece, deep, with some beautiful and unusual use of language - I love "needled pinch" - (I would LOVE the last two words to be switched around to read "nothing came except a falling leaf"!) - an impressive poem - congrats on your win in my contest :)
Mehta Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 5:57 AM
Congratulations on this fine win, Daniel
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