An Empty Promise
An empty promise is what you are you let your family make your choices for you. You will
never get very far in life. I really cared for you but you would not see us through. We
could have went far if you would of just stayed with me. Many things we could of
learned from each other. But that is ok with me because now I’m free from you. No
more of your empty promises I will see. I’m glad we did not make it that far because an
empty promise is all you are and all you will ever be.
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