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An Emotional Rollercoaster

Through the many changes of life one goes up but then comes down so often with no reason or no rhyme just simply makes you show a frown To show feelings makes one strange for you have notions of others thought thinking they think this of me I'm sure but all the time I'm wrong a lot The impression all of us sometimes give is being cold-hearted lacking real care not wanting to show how we really are putting up our guard pointing to the air But maybe if we dared to be really true the other person would receive us back with arms outstretched ready to cuddle now wouldn't that show we can crack Sometimes we need to take a chance you never know what could come about life could be transformed even overnight believe? do you now have a doubt?

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Date: 7/8/2019 4:37:00 PM
Sometimes i think we build the walls and are afraid to let our guards down because of past pain....that emotional rollercoaster is full of suspense and pleasure, one just has to be willing to enjoy the ride! As you can see this one made me ponder many thoughts....wonderful write Gordon! hugs :)
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 7/8/2019 5:10:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, glad you were made to ponder many thoughts but still enjoyed my piece, hope this day has been good for you. Hugs aplenty, Gordon
Date: 7/8/2019 3:31:00 PM
I have doubts lots of times, but then ... Hope... Wonderful write.. I love it. Ann
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 7/8/2019 3:48:00 PM
Thanks Ann, Glad you loved it and indeed we all would echo your words of many a doubt but God is greater than our doubts!

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