Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Verse

An Emotion In Motion - a Triplet

She stands vulnerable, confident and excited
Delicate hands, arms deliberately sided 
A soft etching to art and beauty enlivened and lusted.

My love for her is quite stormy
Like dark drifting clouds of agony
As her windswept hair lashes my effrontery.

The water falls from the eyes crazy
And blinds me to her beauty
Dragged down by a heart heavy.

The heart in a sad sea of terrible tears
It makes my conscience shivers
And finally disappears

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March 17, 2014
Form: Triplet - a short form not available on PS
Fourth Place Win
Contest: Heart And Soul by Kelly Deschler

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Sara Kendrick April 26, 2014 at 9:08 AM Enjyed reading your work this morn..Congrats on your win..Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats.Sara

Connie Marcum Wong March 24, 2014 at 3:04 AM Your lovely poem is filled with deep emotion and poignancy. Congratulations on your win!

Frederic Parker March 19, 2014 at 9:15 PM A strong poem, congrats on your win Dr Ram

Poet Destroyer A March 19, 2014 at 4:18 PM Dr Ram, . Congratulations in "Kelly D's Heart And Soul, contest." Always & Forever *XOX* LINDA

Nette Onclaud March 19, 2014 at 9:00 AM lyrically quilled, dr.ram.. sweet congrats on your win!.. huggs

Theresa Stephens March 19, 2014 at 6:57 AM Hi Ram, Many congrats on your heartfelt poem. A worthy win. Regards Theresaxx

Skat A March 18, 2014 at 10:15 PM Dr. , you put A lot of Heart And Soul into your writing, enjoyed your winning poem.... Love ~SKAT~

Roger Horsch March 18, 2014 at 7:11 PM Congrats Dr Ram on your win. A well written poem......Roger

Michael Dom March 17, 2014 at 7:27 AM Enjoyed the way those line were constructed. 'The heart in a sad sea of terrible tears'. Nice write.