An Elysian Field

Within a lush verdant meadow, meanders a lazy river Where wildflowers bloom beneath the warm breath of the sun They sway upon a gypsy wind on this early morning in June Stems of purple heather rise above the carpeted earth, Emerald green as any Irish hillside or garden near the shore Their saccharine scented plumes attract the pollen seekers Bursts of color can be seen in shades of scarlet and white For growing on the river's bank is a plethora of anemone Not the variety that resides in the depths of a sea Yellow iris mingle with daisies in this alfresco arboretum Untouched by the hand of man, it's an immaculate bouquet Resplendent in perfumed glory and pristine perfection There's the mellifluous sound of a cascading waterfall singing a soft melody as it spills from crevices of granite rock Nourishing the serpentine river flowing through the glade This haven appears as an Elysian Field, as Eden must have been A sanctuary to remain inviolate and reverenced by the gods Perceived to be hallowed ground, too sublime for mortal man September 29, 2021 Your Best Sijo Poetry Contest Sponsored by William Kekaula

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Date: 10/15/2021 1:54:00 PM
I have read your winner and see its good qualities. Way to go in the contest. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 10/13/2021 7:48:00 PM
Jenna, your ink flowed magically to have embroidered this constructive tapestry! Truly worthy of First Place my friend, Aloha!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/14/2021 6:32:00 AM
William, thank you for liking my lines. You were very generous with your entries.
Date: 10/9/2021 12:44:00 PM
Love love love this! Awesome write. God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/9/2021 3:16:00 PM
I am pleased you like it so well. Thanks, Gina.
Date: 9/30/2021 1:23:00 AM
Awesome imagery throughout, Jenna:) a winner, for sure:)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2021 6:24:00 AM
I'm delighted that you think it worthy. Thanks a lot, Jo.
Date: 9/29/2021 3:05:00 PM
Lovely piece Jenna, so superbly penned with nice imagery too. Blessings always,Gordon
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/30/2021 6:23:00 AM
Hi Gordon, and thanks so much for your kind remarks.
Date: 9/29/2021 9:31:00 AM
I better withdraw my entry! remarkable poetry as ever Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/29/2021 9:43:00 AM
You will do no such thing! Lol Thanks, Jan.
Date: 9/29/2021 8:47:00 AM
Wonderful. I've been trying to write a poem on these lines but failed. Best for a win.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/29/2021 8:56:00 AM
Don't think of it as a failure, Victor. You just haven't captured the right ambiance for the message your mind and heart are trying to relay. Thanks so much for your kind comments.
Date: 9/29/2021 7:09:00 AM
You've given us heaven on earth in your sijo Jenna, your imagery is stunning, love the reference to an Irish hillside, your discription is spot on. Hope your day is going well. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/29/2021 7:59:00 AM
Sounds like a heavenly place on earth to me. I'm very appreciative of the encouraging comments you leave for so many in the soup. You're such a kind and support man, Tom.
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