An Elevator Ride Of Love


Elevator rides have a special significance Only four floors but oh what a ride For the two of us it was like a journey to paradise Pouring out what was locked up inside Hurried moments till we reached our floor Added to the thrill of each kiss Always left with wanting more, more, more Those stolen moments of bliss Lived for thirty years deep in my memory Trumpets of love were a-sounding An unmatched feeling of wanting so strong Can still feel my heart a-pounding We must have been two of the luckiest souls Fit together like a hand in glove Twas the first thing on my mind every morning This elevator ride of love We wondered how many, if any we fooled None, not a single damn soul We sure didn't care in our own loving world The greatest tale ever told
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De Beaulieu Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 10:34 AM
Hello Happy Jack, oh wow! I wonder how many people find love in the elevator. Love, /Darlene/ xxxx-oooo.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 11:37 AM
Hello Happy Jack, It does! Wow! I did not know that. Well I just learned something i did not know. thank you. Love /Darlene/ xxxx-oooo.
Ellison Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 5:18 AM
Oh it happens... trust me!!!
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 4:14 PM
Hello Happy Jack, It is not that uncommon to happen inside an elevator! Then I guess it does happen. Love, /Darlene/ xxxxx-ooooo.
Ellison Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 10:51 AM
WOW! It's not all that common :) I would imagine! Love Jack xxx
Cunningham Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 5:28 AM
Love is all we need, if you're in love you're richer than you know. Hope your week is going well Jack. Tom
Ellison Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 5:47 AM
Well said Tom my dear friend You're a romantic old buggar just like me a couple of mushies!!! WOW what a pair eh (lol) Cheers!
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