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An Elevator Ride Of Love

Elevator rides have a special significance Only four floors but oh what a ride For the two of us it was like a journey to paradise Pouring out what was locked up inside Hurried moments till we reached our floor Added to the thrill of each kiss Always left with wanting more, more, more Those stolen moments of bliss Lived for thirty years deep in my memory Trumpets of love were a-sounding An unmatched feeling of wanting so strong Can still feel my heart a-pounding We must have been two of the luckiest souls Fit together like a hand in glove Twas the first thing on my mind every morning This elevator ride of love We wondered how many, if any we fooled None, not a single damn soul We sure didn't care in our own loving world The greatest tale ever told

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Date: 3/19/2025 10:34:00 AM
Hello Happy Jack, oh wow! I wonder how many people find love in the elevator. Love, /Darlene/ xxxx-oooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/21/2025 11:37:00 AM
Hello Happy Jack, It does! Wow! I did not know that. Well I just learned something i did not know. thank you. Love /Darlene/ xxxx-oooo.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/21/2025 5:18:00 AM
Oh it happens... trust me!!!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/19/2025 4:14:00 PM
Hello Happy Jack, It is not that uncommon to happen inside an elevator! Then I guess it does happen. Love, /Darlene/ xxxxx-ooooo.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/19/2025 10:51:00 AM
WOW! It's not all that common :) I would imagine! Love Jack xxx
Date: 3/19/2025 5:28:00 AM
Love is all we need, if you're in love you're richer than you know. Hope your week is going well Jack. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/19/2025 5:47:00 AM
Well said Tom my dear friend You're a romantic old buggar just like me a couple of mushies!!! WOW what a pair eh (lol) Cheers!

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