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An Elevator Ride Of Love

Elevator rides have a special significance Only four floors but oh what a ride For the two of us it was a journey to paradise Pouring out what was locked up inside Hurried moments till we reached our floor Added to the thrill of each kiss Always left with wanting more, more, more Those stolen moments of bliss Lived for thirty years deep in my memory Trumpets of love were a-sounding An unmatched feeling of wanting so strong Can still feel my heart a-pounding We must have been two of the luckiest souls Fit together like a hand in a glove Twas the first thing on my mind every morning This elevator ride of love Wonder how many if any we fooled each day None not a single damn soul We sure didn't care in our own loving world The greatest tale of love ever told

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Date: 4/15/2024 4:08:00 AM
Very romantic verse Jack, greetings from Crete in Greece, I'm travelling again. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/15/2024 6:48:00 AM
Canada is on my bucket list, be great to meet up.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/15/2024 5:15:00 AM
Off again eh... what life you lead! Think you should try Canada!!! We could have cuppa caffeine together! Cheers my friend!
Date: 4/14/2024 12:55:00 PM
...wowza man...all enjoy meant..."care (in/of our own loving world) thee great test tale of love (ever told)".....what'a write......stan
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/14/2024 2:43:00 PM
Thanks Stan!!! Much appreciated for those kind words! Cheers!
Date: 4/14/2024 5:32:00 AM
awww...a delightful love poem. Young love doesn't care...elevators provide the perfect opportunity for expressing love. Gosh, I remember those days with my hubby...deliciously sweet days enthralled with the magic that is love. Have a great day Jack, hugs, Sara
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/14/2024 5:45:00 AM
Oh those days of young love never to be forgotten!!! The passion of young love oh those days xxx

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