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An Elephant's Tears

An Elephant weeps,
Takes small steps with heavy feet,
Slowly moving on.

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Skat A

December 6, 2015 at 12:42 PM

Enjoying an elephant's tear once again. Deep haiku. SKAT

Skat A

July 3, 2015 at 6:39 PM

William, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

William Keane

July 9, 2015 at 5:59 AM

Many thanks, I look forward to sharing and reading more poetry to improve and grow as a writer.

Poet Destroyer A

July 3, 2015 at 5:33 PM

William, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

William Keane

July 9, 2015 at 5:59 AM

Thank you for the kind welcome. It's always nice to get encouragement for a new hobbie. :)

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