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An Elephant's tears

An Elephant weeps, Takes small steps with heavy feet, Slowly moving on.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/6/2015 12:42:00 PM
Enjoying an elephant's tear once again. Deep haiku. SKAT
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Date: 7/8/2015 8:41:00 PM
Hi WILLIAM.. this is a powerful, well constructed write, that I enjoyed reading today! I want to WELCOME you to Poetry Soup, a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. I read a lot of poems and I'm looking forward to checking out more of your works. PS.. If you have a moment, check out my poems as well. I'm looking forward to becoming friends with those who do (Iron sharpens Iron).. Talk soon, LYRIC MAN
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William Keane
Date: 7/9/2015 5:57:00 AM
Thanks Lyric Man, you are quite the prolific writer! I will enjoy perusing through your work in the coming days.
Date: 7/3/2015 6:39:00 PM
William, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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William Keane
Date: 7/9/2015 5:59:00 AM
Many thanks, I look forward to sharing and reading more poetry to improve and grow as a writer.
Date: 7/3/2015 5:33:00 PM
William, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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William Keane
Date: 7/9/2015 5:59:00 AM
Thank you for the kind welcome. It's always nice to get encouragement for a new hobbie. :)