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I dance with a beautiful angel, harps resonate heavenly tunes, I pirouette with a divine beauty, strain my ears to celestial croons. Would this beatific joyfulness last for blessed eternal time, since I have found an angel that dances so sublime? The problem that now faces me is whether she really cares, for it's not easy to discern if I'm one who capably shares the love of something so divine. So worried I tremble that all this will end, will this dance go on and on and on despite the fact I do still pretend that I have not toiled and laboured in vain but wish it will never end in bitter pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 3/28/2021 5:35:00 PM
That’s so lovely Victor, a dance with an Angel will last forever in time, even if only a fragment of one’s mind... Belle
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Date: 3/28/2021 4:59:00 PM
Hi Victor, What a lovely and sweet tale. I had a chance to watch such a wonderful and exciting dance. Brilliant work. Best wishes //Las
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Date: 3/28/2021 1:26:00 PM
Very pretty one, Victor. Did you ever hear the oldie song Earth Angel. It's very different from your take on that theme.
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Date: 3/28/2021 1:17:00 PM
Hi Victor, What a lovely and enchanting write. I enjoyed watching such a beautiful and romantic dance. Well done, have a great:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/28/2021 11:55:00 AM
- What a wonderful dance partner ... beautiful, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/28/2021 9:31:00 AM
Dancing with an angel is heavenly! If it's a dream, it's a nice one. :)
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Date: 3/28/2021 7:50:00 AM
Ahh!! I hope it works out. Sometimes a person is one who stays like the wedding vows say to stay and others move on. Your visit to say congrats on my POTD was nice. Sara
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Date: 3/28/2021 5:51:00 AM
To dance with the one you love, so romantic. Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/28/2021 4:48:00 AM
Beautiful visions, Victor--your poem dances to blissful rhythms. Wonderful, creative, write.
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Date: 3/28/2021 4:41:00 AM
Very romantic verse Victor, I hope the dance lasts forever in your dreams. Tom
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Date: 3/28/2021 4:30:00 AM
Only in my dreams could such a vision be so lovely. Well written, Victor.
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Date: 3/28/2021 3:56:00 AM
It's sad to have such doubts when you dance with an angel, Victor. Nicely penned!
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