Victor Buhagiar Poet Rhyme

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An Earthly Angel

I dance with a beautiful angel,
harps resonate heavenly tunes,
I pirouette with a divine beauty,
strain my ears to celestial croons.
 
Would this beatific joyfulness last
for blessed eternal time,
since I have found an angel
that dances so sublime?
 
The problem that now faces me
is whether she really cares,
for it's not easy to discern
if I'm one who capably shares
 
the love of something so divine.
So worried I tremble that all this will end,
will this dance go on and on and on
despite the fact I do still pretend
 
that I have not toiled and laboured in vain
but wish it will never end in bitter pain.

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Beryl Edmonds March 28, 2021 at 5:35 PM That’s so lovely Victor, a dance with an Angel will last forever in time, even if only a fragment of one’s mind... Belle

Sotto Poet March 28, 2021 at 4:59 PM Hi Victor, What a lovely and sweet tale. I had a chance to watch such a wonderful and exciting dance. Brilliant work. Best wishes //Las

Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2021 at 1:26 PM Very pretty one, Victor. Did you ever hear the oldie song Earth Angel. It's very different from your take on that theme.

Alexis Y. March 28, 2021 at 1:17 PM Hi Victor, What a lovely and enchanting write. I enjoyed watching such a beautiful and romantic dance. Well done, have a great:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2021 at 11:55 AM - What a wonderful dance partner ... beautiful, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 28, 2021 at 9:31 AM Dancing with an angel is heavenly! If it's a dream, it's a nice one. :)

Sara Kendrick March 28, 2021 at 7:50 AM Ahh!! I hope it works out. Sometimes a person is one who stays like the wedding vows say to stay and others move on. Your visit to say congrats on my POTD was nice. Sara

Eve Roper March 28, 2021 at 5:51 AM To dance with the one you love, so romantic. Hugs Eve

Vijay Pandit March 28, 2021 at 4:48 AM Beautiful visions, Victor--your poem dances to blissful rhythms. Wonderful, creative, write.

Tom Cunningham March 28, 2021 at 4:41 AM Very romantic verse Victor, I hope the dance lasts forever in your dreams. Tom

Jenna Logan March 28, 2021 at 4:30 AM Only in my dreams could such a vision be so lovely. Well written, Victor.

Carolyn Devonshire March 28, 2021 at 3:56 AM It's sad to have such doubts when you dance with an angel, Victor. Nicely penned!