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An Appeal From a Desperate Young Man

It's hardships if less inspired Life direction will be direct less And your decision making becomes pointless Likened to the Caribbean pirates in distress I hope i can be Orlando Bloom Who has a Keira Knightly that is bewilderingly lovely and gives his life hope and direction with a touch of love and affection i hope someone would give mercy To someone like me in weary It's as if i'm a damsel in distress Locked helpless inside a fortress I am in a terrible and desperate situation Calling out for someone that can be my inspiration I hope she will give me hope and caress For i'm like a frog who needs a kiss from a princess Oh my princess, i hope you'll be for real And come out from nowhere to help me with great deal Inspire me and energize me, Oh my dear lady And please include it with love that i need greatly I NEED COMMENTS......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/8/2011 7:50:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Jhobeb. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, laughter, and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/8/2011 7:29:00 AM
a great poem,..well-written and nice picture in mind...as well as the idea expressed....great to be another Filipino...*_*junjun
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