Keith O.J. Hunt Poet Rhyme

An Angel My Sun

I am the one 
   who rises in the east
   and sets in the west,
I am all the best
   of orange, yellow
   pink and red;

With many faces of love 
   I have come
   to build empires 
   of light
   and make bright
   as a fire-sky ----
   a smile for every season,
   and harvest hope ----
   all the while
   the Earth is sleeping
   
   (and I am set)

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Red Fiery March 3, 2016 at 7:58 PM You have done miracle in just few lines...very very impressive...I hope to read more of your poems..keep writing !

Matthew Anish January 13, 2016 at 10:53 PM Nice verse here! It is freezing in NYC. I recently published tow poems in Beyond Bree - which is a publication of the Mensa Tolkien Special interest group. I have been writing for it for years. "empire of light" - nice phrase! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A December 25, 2015 at 11:09 PM Keith, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Matthew Anish December 17, 2015 at 8:20 PM Liked it! I am not sure. however, what you meant in the last line Keith O.J. Hunt December 18, 2015 at 11:04 AM Hey Matt, thanks for your visit. The last line really means that when the sun sets or when things get 'grim' --- one always has hope in it rising, or things getting better. Shall we say, a metaphor for hope? Cheers! ;-)

Jan Allison December 17, 2015 at 4:16 PM such delightful imagery Keith a beautiful read thanks for sharing:-) hugs Jan xx7 Keith O.J. Hunt December 17, 2015 at 6:43 PM Thanks Jan! Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas and holiday season! Keith;-)

Anne-Lise Andresen December 14, 2015 at 1:03 PM - Enjoy reading your lovely poems today, Keith - Now that the time is near ....I want to wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas for you and your loved ones - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Keith O.J. Hunt December 17, 2015 at 6:47 PM Many thanks Anne Lise. Always a pleasure for your visits! Wishing you and your family a very Merry and Happy Christmas! Keith;-) Keith O.J. Hunt December 17, 2015 at 6:46 PM Many thanks Anne Lise. Always a pleasure for your visits! Wishing you and your family a very Merry and Happy Christmas! Keith;-)

Arthur Vaso December 8, 2015 at 6:29 PM Hi Keith, great poem!

Matthew Anish November 9, 2015 at 7:26 AM Stimulating! Please comment on my Chanukah poem - no one has yet and I believe it is one of my better ones. Have you read Tolkien - Donaldson? Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish