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An Angel My Sun

I am the one who rises in the east and sets in the west, I am all the best of orange, yellow pink and red; With many faces of love I have come to build empires of light and make bright as a fire-sky ---- a smile for every season, and harvest hope ---- all the while the Earth is sleeping (and I am set)

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Red Fiery

Date: 3/3/2016 7:58:00 PM

You have done miracle in just few lines...very very impressive...I hope to read more of your poems..keep writing !

Matthew Anish

Date: 1/13/2016 10:53:00 PM

Nice verse here! It is freezing in NYC. I recently published tow poems in Beyond Bree - which is a publication of the Mensa Tolkien Special interest group. I have been writing for it for years. "empire of light" - nice phrase! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2015 11:09:00 PM

Keith, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/17/2015 8:20:00 PM

Liked it! I am not sure. however, what you meant in the last line

Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 12/18/2015 11:04:00 AM

Hey Matt, thanks for your visit. The last line really means that when the sun sets or when things get 'grim' --- one always has hope in it rising, or things getting better. Shall we say, a metaphor for hope? Cheers! ;-)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/17/2015 4:16:00 PM

such delightful imagery Keith a beautiful read thanks for sharing:-) hugs Jan xx7

Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 12/17/2015 6:43:00 PM

Thanks Jan! Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas and holiday season! Keith;-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/14/2015 1:03:00 PM

- Enjoy reading your lovely poems today, Keith - Now that the time is near ....I want to wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas for you and your loved ones - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 12/17/2015 6:47:00 PM

Many thanks Anne Lise. Always a pleasure for your visits! Wishing you and your family a very Merry and Happy Christmas! Keith;-)

Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 12/17/2015 6:46:00 PM

Many thanks Anne Lise. Always a pleasure for your visits! Wishing you and your family a very Merry and Happy Christmas! Keith;-)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/8/2015 6:29:00 PM

Hi Keith, great poem!

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/9/2015 7:26:00 AM

Stimulating! Please comment on my Chanukah poem - no one has yet and I believe it is one of my better ones. Have you read Tolkien - Donaldson? Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish