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An Angel My Sun

I am the one 
   who rises in the east
   and sets in the west,
I am all the best
   of orange, yellow
   pink and red;

With many faces of love 
   I have come
   to build empires 
   of light
   and make bright
   as a fire-sky ----
   a smile for every season,
   and harvest hope ----
   all the while
   the Earth is sleeping
   
   (and I am set)

Copyright © Keith O.J. Hunt | Year Posted 2015

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Red Fiery Date: 3/3/2016 7:58:00 PM You have done miracle in just few lines...very very impressive...I hope to read more of your poems..keep writing ! Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 1/13/2016 10:53:00 PM Nice verse here! It is freezing in NYC. I recently published tow poems in Beyond Bree - which is a publication of the Mensa Tolkien Special interest group. I have been writing for it for years. "empire of light" - nice phrase! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/25/2015 11:09:00 PM Keith, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 12/17/2015 8:20:00 PM Liked it! I am not sure. however, what you meant in the last line Login to Reply Keith O.J. Hunt Date: 12/18/2015 11:04:00 AM Hey Matt, thanks for your visit. The last line really means that when the sun sets or when things get 'grim' --- one always has hope in it rising, or things getting better. Shall we say, a metaphor for hope? Cheers! ;-)

Jan Allison Date: 12/17/2015 4:16:00 PM such delightful imagery Keith a beautiful read thanks for sharing:-) hugs Jan xx7 Login to Reply Keith O.J. Hunt Date: 12/17/2015 6:43:00 PM Thanks Jan! Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas and holiday season! Keith;-)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/14/2015 1:03:00 PM - Enjoy reading your lovely poems today, Keith - Now that the time is near ....I want to wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas for you and your loved ones - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Keith O.J. Hunt Date: 12/17/2015 6:47:00 PM Many thanks Anne Lise. Always a pleasure for your visits! Wishing you and your family a very Merry and Happy Christmas! Keith;-) Keith O.J. Hunt Date: 12/17/2015 6:46:00 PM Many thanks Anne Lise. Always a pleasure for your visits! Wishing you and your family a very Merry and Happy Christmas! Keith;-)

Arthur Vaso Date: 12/8/2015 6:29:00 PM Hi Keith, great poem! Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 11/9/2015 7:26:00 AM Stimulating! Please comment on my Chanukah poem - no one has yet and I believe it is one of my better ones. Have you read Tolkien - Donaldson? Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish Login to Reply