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An Angel Made Of Lace

two wings and a spirit of grace aerial ventures, I better brace portals venues open space time slows down we embrace suddenly ascending a staircase I espy an Angel, made of lace.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/26/2024 7:50:00 AM

Lovely poem. For your consideration for line 3: 'open space' would work fine.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/26/2024 3:57:00 PM

Thank you for your advice dear Line, I changed it, :)

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 1/17/2024 4:57:00 AM

Lovely! Sweet

Silent One

Date: 1/16/2024 12:38:00 PM

This one is really sweet.. you described it very well my friend..

Yann Rolland

Date: 1/15/2024 4:47:00 PM

it sounds like a vision, very inspiring indeed, have a sweet day poet

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/16/2024 3:39:00 AM

a vision indeed, when fleetingly they arrive the sky is lit with light and the soul eases up. Yann

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/15/2024 4:36:00 PM

what a delightful 'sighting'--perhaps that always happens when 'time slows?" A lovely read for me this evening. Have a blessed evening, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/16/2024 3:39:00 AM

Yes only when time slows and we are living in a pivotal moment of grace, that is when we espy them :)