Mystic Rose Rose Poet Rhyme

An Angel Made Of Lace

two wings and a spirit of grace 
aerial ventures, I better brace  
portals venues open space   
time slows down we embrace  
suddenly ascending a staircase 
I espy an Angel, made of lace.

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Line Gauthier January 26, 2024 at 7:50 AM Lovely poem. For your consideration for line 3: 'open space' would work fine. Mystic Rose Rose January 26, 2024 at 3:57 PM Thank you for your advice dear Line, I changed it, :)

Paghunda Zahid January 17, 2024 at 4:57 AM Lovely! Sweet

Silent One January 16, 2024 at 12:38 PM This one is really sweet.. you described it very well my friend..

Yann Rolland January 15, 2024 at 4:47 PM it sounds like a vision, very inspiring indeed, have a sweet day poet Mystic Rose Rose January 16, 2024 at 3:39 AM a vision indeed, when fleetingly they arrive the sky is lit with light and the soul eases up. Yann