Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Rhyme

An Angel In Your Eyes-Win

An Angel In Your Eyes

On February 1st 1966, I saw the brightest moon,
The coolest moon ever that has shone in my life.
As the space craft Luna-II landed on to the moon
Same time Luna was born to Chandrika, my wife.

Luna-II, the spacecraft landing in precincts of moon
My Luna rising in the precincts of a maternity home
I was all ears hearing news but my heart was tuned
To the phone conjuring up hospital scene blythesome 

I did not utter, think or react as my family did feel
But felt something inside me I never felt before it
As if a cool light generated and rooted and reeled
From moon to earth living up to her name sweet.
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Dr. Ram Mehta   - /15-10-13/
!0th place win 
Contest: An Angel in your eyes by Gail Angel Doyle

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Christopher Thor Britt November 13, 2013 at 10:52 PM A beautiful piece. It was very enjoyable to read, Dr. Mehta. How old is Luna now, if you don't mind my inquiring? Dr.Ram Mehta November 14, 2013 at 7:38 PM She is 47 years old and living in Canada

Kiran Bantawa November 12, 2013 at 9:52 AM congrats Dr. Ram.

Roger Horsch November 12, 2013 at 6:47 AM Nice win Dr. Ram, I can't wait for your next one. Roger

Robert Davidson November 12, 2013 at 4:05 AM A wonderful write Dr Ram and thanks again for your kind comments on various poems I have written. Robert CD

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 11, 2013 at 8:07 PM I enjoyed reading again, Dr. Ram! BIG congrats to you!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Joseph May November 11, 2013 at 6:42 PM beautiful poem ....congrats on your win Dr Ram

Stacey Brown November 11, 2013 at 4:05 PM wonderful poem, what a blessed memory! congrats on your win! enjoy the journey, Stacey

Just That Archaic Poet October 23, 2013 at 1:23 PM Very cool juxtaposition, Doc. Very sweet and heartfelt; kudos, my friend! :)

Phyllis Babcock October 19, 2013 at 6:24 PM What a beautiful name- your daughter was named Luna. Thank you for your comments. love phyl

Kelly Deschler October 19, 2013 at 5:42 PM Very beautiful and touching! A wonderfully written poem, Dr., I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you for the nice comments, once again.

Johnny Rhinem October 17, 2013 at 5:26 PM Smile, Very Nice As Beautiful This Comparison Of Life Unto Celestial Light * Shine Bright Sweet Luna ~ Thank You For Your Kind Visit Also Dr. Mehta; Much Appreciated. Love, John

Shadow Hamilton October 17, 2013 at 3:03 PM beautiful Dr Ram you cover both events with plume lovely flow to your rhyme gl in contest Shadow x smile

Liam Mcdaid October 17, 2013 at 2:58 PM wow you sure pen beautiful

Bl Devnath October 17, 2013 at 10:39 AM Beautiful poem for the contest. Good luck my friend. Loved always, bl

Monterey Sirak October 17, 2013 at 7:03 AM The quiet intensity and expansive love that fills this poem are stunning.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 17, 2013 at 4:34 AM Dr. Ram, a nice flow in your rhyming poem - beautiful. - Luck in contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Yadhu Babu October 17, 2013 at 3:00 AM NICE POEM........................... RAM THANKS FOR VISITING MY POEM.....

Joseph Matose October 17, 2013 at 1:08 AM Great Rhyme MEHTA & blessed be Luna, she will dwell in the celestial like her namesake Luna ll. Great tribute to daughter! JM

Russell Sivey October 17, 2013 at 12:41 AM May she shine forever in your eyes my friend! Great Work!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders October 16, 2013 at 10:54 PM I can tell that your Luna is the light of your life...A beautiful, heartfelt poem you have shared tonight, Dr. Ram!