Bukang Liwayway Poet Rhyme

An Angel In Your Eyes

Looking into your eyes my darling,
                                              It sparkles that captivated my soul,
                                              I see an angel in your eyes smiling,
                                             Making you happy is my fervent goal.

                                             Lying in a soft bed as white as cotton,
                                                 Waiting for my hugs and kisses,
                                                  In my arms where you belong,
                                                Feeling my love and sweet caress,

                                                 You are my own, so adorable,
                                                My precious, my cute little baby,
                                                  In your eyes I see an angel,
                                             You complete my heart day by day.


                                                             
                                                        October 19, 2013
                                        For Gail’s “An Angel In Your Eyes” contest
                                   Dedicated to all loving mothers around the world

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Sandra Adams November 4, 2013 at 7:59 PM every mother has an angel to behold...especially in their own eyes...love this poem....lovely work :)

Arthur Vaso October 27, 2013 at 10:52 AM A very beautiful poem!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2013 at 10:19 AM - An Angel In YOUR Eyes !!! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam October 24, 2013 at 8:20 AM Excellent. Beautiful dedication. Enjoyed. Tfs

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri October 22, 2013 at 10:14 AM What motherly affection 4 d lil angels, such a sweet superb poem! Pls review my latest too. :)

Kiran Bantawa October 20, 2013 at 12:08 PM thanks for the lovely dedication.

Andrea Dietrich October 19, 2013 at 11:07 PM sweet sweet. sweet as cam be!!

Johnny Rhinem October 19, 2013 at 2:49 PM † I Have Considered Within This Life Not Knowing Myself But, The Beautiful Blessed Gift A Child Brings Unto Their Parents, Sweet Precious Maria ˜ Truly As An Angel In Some Light These Priceless Babies *.* Beautiful! My Love, Always, John

Len Gasun October 19, 2013 at 11:29 AM Hi, my dearest friend Maria!;)))Actually I was looking forward to this. I've read your comments & replied on it underneath. You see, you did this very well, too. Each one of us here has his/her own great idea & unique way of writing making one's work so marvelous & very impressive. And yours is so great as well. I'm sure this will do well in the contest my dearest friend. Loving it so much & u. You're one of my faves, u know that. By the way, I'm leaving soon. Tcare always! love lots, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen October 19, 2013 at 10:54 AM - Maria, a beautiful and sparkling poetry .... perhaps also a winning poem wish you good luck in the contest! - Have a great weekend, dear friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)