Floyd Neal Poet Enclosed Rhyme

An Amazing Friend

With your first "hello", your voice so mesmerizing
when I look at you, your eyes are a glow
feeling the vibration of your charm, so hypnotizing
when our eyes met, we connected as friends, I know
Your smile so soft and drowsy
as you let it play upon your face
friendships, like rose gardens
they need care and protection, to bloom.
You are a precious gem of love and compassion
friendships are sometimes clear, like window glass
that's being lightly expressed, with a soft passion
you make each new day better than the last
For this friendship, great distances were traveled
suddenly, captivated by your personality, so bubbly and bright
your voice granted me a peace, I didn't know possible
and wasted no time carving it's place in my heart

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 13, 2015 at 12:52 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning write Floyd! Floyd Neal October 13, 2015 at 4:54 PM Thank you Dr. Sharma for your encouraging comments. I will read some of your work also.

Skat A October 12, 2015 at 11:59 AM Hi Floyd, congratulations... SKAT Floyd Neal October 13, 2015 at 4:55 PM Thanks SKAT A for the comment. I will read some of your work also.

Poet Destroyer A October 8, 2015 at 11:56 PM Floyd, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by my latest PINKTOBER blog titles "YOU SAY," if you'd like or have time. Always ~LINDA~ Floyd Neal October 13, 2015 at 4:57 PM Thanks Poet Destroyer A for the comment. I will read some of your work also.