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An Addicts Lone Thought

Sitting at home, alone in my room, thinking to self...today, my doom. A spoon full of crumbs, a spoon full of stuff, put out my smoke, done took the last puff. Looking for the right, the so perfect vein, I'm doing this now, in to much pain. The shot has been shot, its quickly away, no dying right now, no dying today. The next one will happen, know this to be said, an addicts pleasure, often..more pain, instead. Thinking to self...tomorrow, my doom, sitting at home, alone in my room.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 6/28/2019 10:39:00 PM
My pleasure. Do drop by and visit my writing.
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Kenneth Brenner
Date: 7/1/2019 9:31:00 PM
Absolutely..positively..witnout a doubt..i will. :-)
Date: 5/27/2019 6:36:00 AM
Sounds almost like the fateful lullaby of a fiend... Hypnotic yet dark
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Kenneth Brenner
Date: 5/29/2019 2:07:00 AM
It's a sumthn Ash, lol..always I will value comments..ty so much for reading.."Hypnotic yet dark"..excellent choice of words.
Date: 5/20/2019 6:16:00 PM
phew, heavy duty .... addiction.
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Kenneth Brenner
Date: 5/20/2019 10:08:00 PM
Without a doubt..a topic that never receives proper acknowledgment..Thankfully and God willing..only a topic that interests me. With only negative impressions, and inflicting millions, this poem as with addiction will remain.
Date: 5/12/2019 9:48:00 AM
Not an HM but worthy of being read. Congrats.
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Kenneth Brenner
Date: 5/16/2019 11:33:00 AM
Thank you Richard so much..Im glad you read the poem, and thanks so much for contest.

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