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An Acre In Eden

Eden's dusk beams light 
As shining dawn sails asky
Amidst sea of gleams

'Lil' planets trade zones
Webbing auras with passion
In fate guarded bends

Yet 'still' were a few
The 'nerdy' moon, 'sorry' star
Rolling out lone cold

Within an acre
They grazed rays, lighting deep flames
'A new begining'

Marred with dusts and doubts
Distance, time and spatial threats
Strangling lanky hope

Beyond lenghts of Nile
Word travels from miles apart
Moistening dried lips

 At the birth of Sun
Before the Star, the Moon lived
Sage to Eden's shores

Pending hymns and songs
Howling drones of liberty
at shaky hearts stake

Still Eden's field blooms
Its grasses greener with hopes
Of a sterling dusk

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/23/2013 10:06:00 PM
wow! I love the long chain of Haiku. i feel the passion rising from each KU' my favorite is Pending hymns and songs... Eden, the first beauty of this world... . I posted a new poem called (HANDS) stop by and tell me what you think... Looking forward in seeing you around my poetry. love love~ & Hugs **LINDA
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