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An acre in Eden

Eden's dusk beams light As shining dawn sails asky Amidst sea of gleams 'Lil' planets trade zones Webbing auras with passion In fate guarded bends Yet 'still' were a few The 'nerdy' moon, 'sorry' star Rolling out lone cold Within an acre They grazed rays, lighting deep flames 'A new begining' Marred with dusts and doubts Distance, time and spatial threats Strangling lanky hope Beyond lenghts of Nile Word travels from miles apart Moistening dried lips At the birth of Sun Before the Star, the Moon lived Sage to Eden's shores Pending hymns and songs Howling drones of liberty at shaky hearts stake Still Eden's field blooms Its grasses greener with hopes Of a sterling dusk

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Date: 7/23/2013 10:06:00 PM
wow! I love the long chain of Haiku. i feel the passion rising from each KU' my favorite is Pending hymns and songs... Eden, the first beauty of this world... . I posted a new poem called (HANDS) stop by and tell me what you think... Looking forward in seeing you around my poetry. love love~ & Hugs **LINDA
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