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09/21/2026

1501 September 2026  Part 4x4 

 

Contest by Brian Strand 

 

 

AN. ACHE

                   I carried so many wounds since childhood  -
                   all along, as my Mom behaved so rude.
                    Being deprived of Mom’s care - affection,
                    my childhood turned a curse: Shame to mention!

                 School happened to close on recess one day.
                 I went to a friend’s house to enjoy and play.
                     Engrossed, I was not alert on time gap
                   I reached home too late. Mom gave me a slap.

             Normal reception , but on next moment,
            She burst in tears which I did not expect.
         She wept and wept ‘Where had you been my child?
              I was so scared to lose you, where to find?’

              That big slap turned nicest scar in my heart,
              though my mother always left me apart.
                I realised, behind her strong bitter harshness
              Motherly love somewhere flowing ceaseless .
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