An Ace

Everything was packed from shirts to shoe laces, Anyone could tell which was heavier - the sunken heart or the wrapped cases, And she marched to say goodbye to all the teary eyed yet smiling faces, Only to collapse into the arms of her beloved who beheld firmly and said- This fight is unlike the rat races For it’s a quest to be Ace among of the Aces!

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Beata Agustin

Date: 8/5/2024 8:00:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.