Bikal Nepal Poet Romanticism

An Accolade To a Love

On the first day HE must have begun
for such beauty couldn't be created on a short span
Eyes designed in a heavenly fashion
Lips ruby enough to appease any man
Hypnotize, mesmerize- to anyone she can
Divine enough to be called earth's Venus
No bitterness, No sadness, No act of heinous

Smile on that face turns my night into day
Content with youth itself forever
All the problems, worries now seem far at bay
She finds the best in me, my perfect lover
When she cries, the heavens turn gloom
When she laughs, Oh! how the flowers bloom
But Alas! though such heavenly beauty HE could've made
Guess he wants her for himself; as for me such divinity neither lives nor is dead!!

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Lydia Jerotich November 15, 2015 at 5:20 AM Great Love accolade Bikal! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen October 22, 2015 at 3:37 AM - Hello Bikal :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bikal Nepal October 24, 2015 at 1:43 AM Thanks a lot Anne! I'm already having a great time. :)

Skat A October 18, 2015 at 4:32 PM Bikal, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Bikal Nepal October 19, 2015 at 6:56 AM Hi SKAT! Thank you so much. I'd love to be your friend too. I'm a student of Computer Engineering and love writing and reading poems in my free time. :)

Poet Destroyer A October 17, 2015 at 5:11 PM Bikal, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Bikal Nepal October 17, 2015 at 10:25 PM Thanks a lot Linda! :)