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OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,

the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) 

to input and responds thus

 making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon 

unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

orbit around ideas  once held close  in past selves rhetoric   bathed in clichéd   visual representation burnished impulse strengthened by the the wilderness of   inner life needs posited  by visual   language  unmoored    from contexts  vagueness &amorphous  abstraction  fervency erased  spring up distilled of some essence  circumvented in narcissistic  grafting of self  in the tangible permanence  of durable words

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Date: 11/15/2024 12:19:00 PM
Always uniquely thoughtful, Brian. You have such a wonderful ability to draw me into a world of creativity and thought. Your poem invites and urges a quest into the realm of self. Sending you blessings for your journey. Thank you for your invitation to come with you on yours.
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Date: 11/14/2024 9:55:00 AM
Interesting & thought-provoking. Thanks for sharing this poem.
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